The unfortunate state of Generic Emails
Most professional emails written - whether they're cold emails or not - are generic and impersonal. This is a shame because it forces the recipient to only feel a certain way about the email. A personalized email, on the other hand, is a much more personal gesture that can be made in a professional manner. The recipient of your email will feel that you are more interested in them and their success.
Personalized Email vs Generic Email
Let's understand the difference between a generic email and a personalized email with the help of an example. Here's a generic email we received recently asking for a guest post:
Hi, Hope you are doing fine, my team and I believe that working together can bring many positive business prospects for us. I am a business development Manager at XYZ, a Guest Posting, and Content Marketing company. We are a veteran guest posting service provider offering excellence in the field for over 12 years. We have operated with well-reputed companies, including Outreach Mama, The Web.com, Clear Voice, Authority Builders, John T. King, and many more. They are a few of our satisfied customer because: - Our 20,000+ inventory of sites has DA ranging between 20 - 90. - Our Sites have real monthly SEMrush traffic from 1 thousand to 1 million. - We provide our guest posting services on sites that belong to over 20 countries some of them are the USA, UK, Canada, Australia, Germany, Spain, Italy, France, Denmark, Norway, and many more. I provide sites for Guest Posting which has a minimum domain authority of 20 to 85. If you are interested in link buying from top-quality sites then you can inform me. If there is something we can work on together then please let me know & still, if you have any queries then feel free to ask me, I will be happy to provide you with quick assistance. If you are interested then tell me about the countries and categories of your niche then I will send you the list of websites for guest posting. Then I will send the sites with a price. Are you interested in working with us? Please let me know if you have any concerns or questions. I'll be more than happy to assist you. Regards, Josh Blacker
Notice how the email lacks personalization. At the most basic level, a personalized email includes the name of the receiver, and this didn't have it. It was likely an email blast that was sent to thousands of people. If you received such an email in your inbox, would you reply to it? Probably not.
On the other hand, let's say you are Bud with the email "bud@sunken-island.com-.and you receive an email like
Hey Bud, I see that you like to travel and surf. I am actually looking to rent my house in the Bahamas next summer. I would love to get your opinion on some places I have been looking into so I can feel confident in my decision.
Would you reply to this email instead? See the difference versus the generic email?
By emailing your prospects with personalization, you are making sure that you are emailing them personally and not sending a generic email. This can also be applied to compliments as well.
Benefits of using a personalized email
Using a personalized email can make all the difference when trying to reach someone. This way, you are reaching out to someone specifically and not spamming them with a mass email. When you send a personalized email, you are giving the individual a chance to take an interest in your company and your offer. This way, you can learn about the person and their interests and tailor your follow-up email to them specifically. Furthermore, personalized emails are more likely to be opened because the individual is seeing that you are trying to reach them specifically.
Enter Lemlist - The tool to send bulk personalized emails
How to deal with the drawbacks of Lemlist?
Lemlist is a great outreach tool but lacks detailed personalization features. The platform lets you personalize emails on;y using predefined fields.
Let me explain what I mean by predefined fields. To send an email campaign using Lemlist, you can import the details of your prospects by uploading a spreadsheet that contains the name, company, website, and other details of the prospects.
Let's say my outreach email template is as follows.
Subject: Cold email marketing software Hello {recipient name}, I am {sender's name} from Lemlist. We are a sales automation and cold email software that helps you grow your business. Here's a brief overview of what Lemlist can do for you: - Personalize your emails to increase engagement - Automate follow-ups to nurture leads and turn them into customers - Engage with leads across all channels - Get more customers and increase sales We know you have a busy schedule, so we would love to send you a free trial of Lemlist. It's the perfect way to see how we can help you grow your business. Just reply to this email to get started. Thanks, {sender name}
The fields within the angular brackets are the predefined fields. In the template above, Lemlist will replace the recipient name from the spreadsheet and send them the email.
The problem with Lemlist here is that it can only personalize emails with the data it is provided. If you want to send a hyper-personalized email that compliments your prospect - like the one below - then Lemlist can't generate such compliments
Hey Bud, I see that you like to travel and surf. I am actually looking to rent my house in the Bahamas next summer. I would love to get your opinion on some places I have been looking into so I can feel confident in my decision
Fortunately, there is a solution. You can use Lemlist with Writecream to generate personalized compliments for your prospects based on either their website or LinkedIn profile.
Let's use Bill Gates' LinkedIn profile as an example. Pop in the link of the LinkedIn profile into Writecream and it generated the following compliments for Mr Gates.
- Output 1: Hey Bill, I came across your impressive profile and I was fascinated to learn more about you. I'm intrigued to know how you're using your experience to help others with the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation. It sounds like you're using your expertise in technology, business, and travel to empower people.
- Output 2: Hey Bill, I saw on your profile that you're currently in Seattle. Are you a big Seattle Seahawks fan or Seattle Mariners fan?
- Output 3: Hey Bill, I came across your Bill Gates Foundation and Breakthrough Energy experience and I'm interested in learning more about how you've been able to impact the world with your various interests and passions.
You can choose either of these compliments. Let's add the first one to our cold email template. We get:
Subject: Cold email marketing software
Hello Bill, I came across your impressive profile and I was fascinated to learn more about you. I'm intrigued to know how you're using your experience to help others with the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation. It sounds like you're using your expertise in technology, business, and travel to empower people. I am John from Lemlist. We are a sales automation and cold email software that helps you grow your business. Here's a brief overview of what Lemlist can do for you: - Personalize your emails to increase engagement - Automate follow-ups to nurture leads and turn them into customers - Engage with leads across all channels - Get more customers and increase sales We know you have a busy schedule, so we would love to send you a free trial of Lemlist. It's the perfect way to see how we can help you grow your business. Just reply to this email to get started. Thanks, John
Besides using the LinkedIn profile of the prospects, Writecream can generate compliments using the website of the prospects as well. Just like Lemlist, you can upload the spreadsheet containing the details of your prospect to Writecream and it will generate a compliment for each prospect that you can include at the top of the email body.
Besides generating compliments, Writecream also lets you generate the entire email body. The cold email template above was generated using Writecream.
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